Value Judgements
"Two men looked from prison bars,
One saw the wind, the other, rich loam."
It's the put-down in "mud" that offends me, the dig of the elbow in passing. Like Lucy in Peanuts, I want ups and upper ups, not ups and downers. Add an up whenever you can.
One saw the wind, the other, rich loam."
It's the put-down in "mud" that offends me, the dig of the elbow in passing. Like Lucy in Peanuts, I want ups and upper ups, not ups and downers. Add an up whenever you can.
posted by Tricia Rose at 8:17 AM
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HOW FAR UP DO YOU WANT TO GET?
P.S. two many syllables is 'rich loam' - prefer mud'
P.P.S.This an UP from -
THE DELIVERER
Rich, fertile loam.
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